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Dont stop Dont wait Dont cry by ~Arctotis:iconArctotis:



Don’t stop just because your heart is broken
Don’t wait for things that will never be spoken
Keep up life will never stop to wait
Stand up It’s not the end, build a new fate

But Don’t forget about all the memories
But remember that’s all they are, just hazy dreams
They can never be replaced inside your heart
But you can make new ones, make a new start

Just because it did not work out between you two
Doesn’t mean it will never work out for you
There is a whole world full of people to meet
So stand and go out and walk on your two feet

Everything happens for a reason
Even all the evil doings and treason
Life goes on you’ll live to see a new day
You’ll find another and in their arms you’ll lay

You’ll realize you had to loose what you had before
To find what you had really been searching for
You’ll be so much happier then you ever were back then
So don’t cry, life goes on and you will be happy again
©2005-2009 ~Arctotis
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Author's Comments

i was talking to someone the other day who was relaly upset about loosing her boyfriend. she thought she would never get over it and no one else would ever love her. This poem is a summary of what i told her, just in poetry form.
I think a lot of people have lost someone they love but i think its important you remember some of things said in this poem

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:iconemilis:
I absolutely love this poem Haylo! It's greatly constructed, brilliant rhyme and rhythm, and a wonderful message. I like poems which try to send a message to people, to try and help them. It sure beats wrist-slasher poems!!

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Emily Jane
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Thanks muchly ejay!! nice comments its helpful to remember that for future poems
yes, i strongly agree, it does beat wrist-slasher poems

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.:even the angels can't hold their wings up forever:.
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I cant belive how great this poem is !!!!!!!! your a great friend if you said those things to them to cheer them up! your such a nice person! keep up your awsome work!!!!!! i was gonna tell you my fav lines but it ended up as like 6 so i`ll tell you some other time great work! ^^

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